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Fantastic!

i wish everyone animated like this, not just random crap. i would gladly rate it higher if it where longer ect ect, but although it has no 'story' its plot is nicely interlaced and the animation is quite stunning. i like your style.

PapaLongLegs responds:

thanks a lot! Lets hope everyone reads into this review

This looks just like something i did...

when i was in school, on Microsoft powerpoint. even the colours of the people are the same. its really strange. same guns, explosions even the guy coming down on a rope.

you should try to not use stick figures, fighting or guns. TRY to be original, think of characters with characteristics and a way to draw people into a plot.

pretty bad..

but the audio is good quality and funny. i like the style, you just need to work a bit more on quality. all stars go to audio and visual style, try making it longer with a small plot of some sort (the more ridiculous the better).

i like your style.

i think you should try and make the blood more detailed. zoom in a bit while drawing it and create some frame by frame symbols for blood splatter ect using different shades and more interesting shapes.

overall i enjoyed it, quirky and amusing.

Kreid responds:

aye, to say it was titled blood, I could'a focused more on...well....the blood

its these kinda movies i like...

your not the best at animation in the world, but you really put in the effort and it really pays off big time, keep up the awesome work.

Lazyfeet responds:

Hehe, thanks. I can give my aching hands a rest now I guess.

good for your first.

the frame by frame symbols where pleasing to the eye, as a whole its alot nicer to view than stickmen fighting (most peoples first flash animation).

a few things to work on; think about perspective, things far away in the background (like the clouds) are going to move slower across the screen than somthing close in the foreground (like the grass), it just didnt look right in the movie.

the length of the move is good, with alot happening and good colouring. for a first animation this is very good work, i dont see any lazyness or slacking.

its all up from here. keep at it. its a big learning curve.

YouriX responds:

Thanks for the awsome tips! Next time i'll do something about the perspectives!
thanks for the review ;)

i really enjoyed watching every part of that.

Your animation style is fantastic, your attention to detail and timing are pretty good. most of all this was 100% yours in your own style.

The only criticism i can think of is when you move characters try redrawing the entire char even if you only want to move the hands/arm, that way you dont get small spits in the arm between the moving hand/arm and static body.

Refreshingly original, i really enjoyed every second of this animation.

tacobuttfish responds:

Hey thanks a lot! And thanks for the pointer too, glad you enjoyed it!

-Taco Buttfish.

much better :D

i can see how much work was but into this, and im glad youve put in the effort this time.

awesome stuff.

really nicly animated, i love the simple shapes and colours. youve got great talent!

Nicely Done

i just think the voice acting and quality doesn't do the flash justice. Apart from that it's awesome!

Kreid responds:

Yeah I broke my microphone and had to find one, so I had to kinda rush the voices at last minute to be perfectly honest, but I'll probably get other people for the final version

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